Sign up now to get an in-depth developmental edit of your pitch from an industry insider with 20 years of experience working with both nonprofits and donors!
I'll review your pitch and provide detailed, personalized feedback on:
- How to determine your donor's mindset and adjust your message to match exactly what they're looking for
- How to avoid confusing language and common mistakes that make donors toss your pitch aside
- How to capture a donor's imagination from your first sentence so they want to make your cause their own
- The essential elements of a pitch that donors want to see before they donate (but won't tell you about)
You'll get feedback to improve your fundraising pitch even if you've created successful pitches before.
Hi, I'm Sybil

I have a special understanding of effective giving because I was a nonprofit professional prior to becoming a donor advisor for pathfinding philanthropists.
I have helped donors give away over $45 million in donations large and small, and I have worked with over seventeen philanthropic institutions over a career that spans more than two decades.
I know what it takes for you as a nonprofit leader to pitch a donor effectively, and I want to share my tips and tricks with you.
I will show you how to focus on only the most important parts of fundraising so that you don’t waste time and effort.
- Sybil Ackerman-Munson
With my detailed feedback, you'll learn insider secrets to fundraising pitches that raise money consistently.
If you've struggled to win over donors and raise money, a pitch edit will show you exactly where you've gone wrong and how you can do better (without wasting time learning this through trial and error)
After purchasing, you'll get instructions on how to send me your fundraising pitch write-up. I'll provide feedback and send it back to you.